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Endless Rain - Part 15 by ~BlondeTeraesa:iconBlondeTeraesa:



As the Sendo attacked the Chi village from the front gate – knowing it had been weakened by age and was in the process of being repaired, but improperly barricaded at this juncture – Moyasu was taken by her mother to the far back of the village with the other children and women. Huddling at the back of the encompassing fence of thick wood, the women cried and tried to shield their whimpering children from the sounds of lives being cut short and the defense of the village weakening with every blow. The Sendo had sent battering rams for the very purpose of entering through the weakened gate, and it wasn’t long before the Chi villagers were screaming and falling before the swords, arrows, and spears of the Sendo.

As the Sendo made their way through the Chi men, one by one, the women in the back tried their best to carve holes into the fence to let the children out to the safety of the forest. Working together it didn’t take long, but only twelve children made it through the fence before the cries of women and children being struck down began. Those who made it through the hole were now thirty feet from the tree line, and the safety it offered. But as they ran towards it, Sendo archers perched in trees nearby fired upon them. Moyasu just kept running, her eyes closed tightly and feeling her way only by her hands. One by one the voices of her friends and relatives, most younger than even herself, faded into the background as she continued her insane dash into the unknown. She only stopped when she slipped down a small cliff and into the banks of a wide river. There she cried and mourned the loss of all those she knew.

A few hours later, Moyasu trudged up the bank of the river to look for food. She soon came upon a waterfall where the river came from, and gathered berries from nearby bushes as she admired the beauty that seemed to calm her sadness, fear, and anger.

After eating all she could stomach, Moyasu swam in the pool before the waterfall. It was very relaxing to her, and she stared up at the stars as day turned to night. She could still see smoke coming up into the sky from a far away place, and deduced that must have been her village burning to the ground as she ran. Her brows furrowed as anger boiled within her. The Sendo had left them be for so long, and had taken their lives in their one moment of weakness. It enraged her.

Suddenly, Moyasu thought she saw a flash of light coming from somewhere. She waded in the water and swam in a circle, looking around at the forest and the waterfall, wondering where a flash of light could possibly have come. It frightened her more as she thought about it. It could have been the flash of a Sendo archer, taking his aim on her position. Moyasu rushed to the waterfall and risked the undercurrent to become invisible with the rock face.

That’s when she saw it. Another flash of light. She looked around herself, and noticed it must have come from a crevice behind the waterfall itself, near where she was. Ignoring the thundering sounds of water pounding its way over her head and body, Moyasu stuck her small hand within the hole there and pulled out a red stone of some sort. She couldn’t tell what kind it was, only that it was beautiful. At that thought it flashed once more, and Moyasu suddenly began to smile.

((Da da da dum! :D How'd you like them apples? :nod: The red stone of the dragon called to her and revealed itself to her. Ain't that cool? :boogie: I hope you guys enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it! :wave: ))
©2004-2009 ~BlondeTeraesa
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Author's Comments

Ah, so many lovely parts to the story ... so we're finally into chapter two. I guess it's about time I do another " different perspective" post, being as I'm so good at them ... :giggle: :wave: ... I hope you guys don't mind a little side-story while the main team goes into that cave.

If you're new to the Endless Rain saga, please visit kittyocean and scroll down till you see the second :!: ... that should lead to all the saga information, including rules and past chapters and parts.

I hope you all enjoy this!

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Endless Rain, Chapter 2: Myth or Legend - Part 15 - Loss and Discovery

New Character: Moyasu of the Chi Tribe

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:iconacrocat:
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this sort of plays in the past right? I mean, the Sendo had defeated the Chi before they went to the Mikomi tribe.

I like this part. There is a survivor of the Chi tribe. Well done. :+fav:

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:icondougurasu:
:boogie:coooool. But why is the red stone of the dragon under a waterfall?
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For a second it confused me, just like Acrocat, but now I so totally get it! Why the Ruby of the Dragon (fire) is hidden in a waterfall is unclear to me, but when Hitori and the others find the crystal, it;s firey nature could still be shown!! Awesome as ever!!!

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:iconblondeteraesa:
Didn't you ever watch dragonheart? Dragons live in caves behind waterfalls ^_^ The most inconspicuous places for them to live.

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Yes ... it plays in the past for an important reason. This way when Hitomi and the group find Moyasu, she'll have had time to use the crystals powers and be somewhat a threat before becoming an ally. ^_^ She'll be very bitter about her tribe being killed, so she'll attack anyone ... but if they make it clear they aren't the enemy I'm sure she'll calm down and join their group ...

And I forgot to say what she looked like ... um ... twelve or so years old ... black hair to shoulder blades held up completely in two buns ... no bangs ... bright green eyes ... and is dressed in Chinese-type green silk pants and shirt with white cuffs and black slip-on shoes ... um ... guess that's all ... ^_^ ... although she'll probably also be wearing the stone around her neck, if anyone wants to know, by a chain.

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:icondougurasu:
Heh, no, I never watched that ^^;;. Good explenation XD
:iconacrocat:
Maybe you could draw her, it would be really cool :D.

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I could say it's your best work ever, but who am I to judge for that?
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:iconblondeteraesa:
Maybe ... I was thinking of drawing her sometime soon anyway ... ^_^ ... to make a pic for part 15 since everyone else seems to be doing it ... lol

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